denying captivity
Hundreds of chains
metal clinking
aimless chatter
waiting.
and then all of the sudden
You're lifted off the ground
bare feet enthusiastically
dangling
Arms spread wide
chin up -
eyes to the heavens
on God's glorious roller coaster.
And then the whole world becomes silent
for a minute.
And everyone is instantly united in that joy.
spinning faster
into a dizzied awareness.
There He is,
Taking pleasure in our delight-
within us
and around us-
At the swings.
There He is,
Taking pleasure in our delight-
within us
and around us-
At the swings.
love this poem...it has just the right amount of abstract concepts and specific concrete imagery
ReplyDeleteI love this! Its fabulous..it creates such a vivid picture in my mind. I have noticed that really good writing pieces are able to create an entirely new world..or image in our minds. This piece does just that!
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